All Comments on 'Life's Little Curves Ch. 04'

Neveah is working my nerves now. I understand why she is upset but she need to give Vince a break. When he wasn't working he tried being intimate with her and she kept pushing him away because she was insecure about her body. Now Vince got a job and she feels lonely now and taking it out on him.

Vince really is trying for them. Its not his fault that he hasn't got hired with a regular 9 to 5.

The characters situation seems a bit more realistic and there actions logical I love the story so far it's so interesting

What Aries said...

Can't wait for more yay !

I went on and submitted chapter five, it should be up in a few days. I had some unexpected time off, and I was able to churn out some words. Please continue to leave comment and vote. Thank you for all your words and support