All Comments on 'Light and Dark Ch. 01'

Nice to see Iris has some strength & doesn't completely cave in right away. Keep it up, girl! Don't make it too easy for Ash.

I was pleasantly surprised on how good this chapter was! Wasn't expecting much , was just curious on the title . BUT NOW IM HOOKED !!! I CANT WAIT FOR CHAPTER 2! I hope it goes in a nice dark direction (; . PLZ UPDATE ASAP

You sucked me in! I love it. I, too, can't wait for the next chapter!! Hurry!

That was... that was... well that was awesome. *fans self* I was sucked right in, can't wait for more.

I wouldn't call this chapter non conscent, but it s really great how you take the time to build up character's relationship. Keep it up Olivia!

YOOOO, this was soooo good!

Aside from the awkward introduction by the professor. That was really weird. But I can totally forgive that if this guy is as dangerous as he seems.