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All Comments on 'Light and Shade'

by gittarkid7

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meandering1meandering1over 12 years ago

A wonderful story .....slightly spoiled by small errors .

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
too many adjectives

You're just trying too hard. I think if you would have kept it simple and stretched out the story line it would have been a better story. JMHO

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Provacative

An elegant, yet mysterious darkness hypnotizes the reader to beg for more.

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