All Comments on 'Light of Dusk Ch. 03'

Remarkable chapter! Jeff has really grown onto me since the first chapter of Light of Dawn. There is definitely a different tone between Dawn and Dusk, but the storytelling is just as good as ever. It looks like a happy ending is in store for the siblings, though I can't help but wonder how much they may have to give up to be together. All I know is, I can't wait to see how things escalate.

If Jeff and Dawn do not get to have a happy ending, I'm predicting comment hooligans will tear down the forums in unruly mob postings of soccer-riot proportions! Seeing how Jeff is one of my home-boys in Cowtown, I've gotta watch his back for him as he fights for his beloved. <p>

Great series, looking forward to reading how they finally succeed in letting true love triumph, and Dawn finally being allowed to be happy after all those horrible rapes you put her through... <p> Thank you for sharing!

The burning lust between these two can't be denied. Definitely gets me all hot and bothered! Love how you've matured and developed the characters.

i read this new chapter after it was just published and i think the story is getting better and better! i cant wait for the ending! Let me know about that movie idea i suggested! sincerely, Aven

This story continues to get better and better. It nice to see Jeff and Dawn getting back to where they belong. I hope this has a happy ending for the two

A great deal of hard work must have gone into this series and its paid off,I am sure there will be a very good ending.

Such a great build-up to the final chapter. Every time I read this it's like the first time, and it still brings me to tears, darn you, Mused! Poor Dawn, her heart pulls her one way, that Jenny pulls her another. Tara was just a peach in this chapter; I liked her in Light of Dawn, and I still do. To anyone that hasn't read Light of Dawn, go back and do so. You won't be disappointed! ~Chargergirl

You are such an incredible writer. I am in awe at how you captivate the audience to hang onto your every word.

Bravo!

p.s it would have been an bonus if Jeff came in her, reclaiming sort of way.

To have been proven wrong. I posted a belief that this story probably wouldn't be as good as Light of Dawn, (How many ways can one say 'I love you but I can't love you'). But I love Light of Dusk even more! I especially enjoyed the delightful references to the first story, i.e. Jeff's broken nose or Tara's not minding being called Dawn if it would make Jeff happy. This is simply one of the best brother/sister romances I have ever read...Thank you for sharing your talent.

everytime i read a chapter i alwys end up loving jeff i lovve the way you setted up the scene for this perfect part wen they were finaly together i actually like the way she says i love you but we cant it kind of reminds me of a soap oprea you are a great writer

Breathtakingly amazing!! Please keep it coming!!

They HAVE to be together. No if ands or buts about. This is simply beautiful.

just loved it...

The lovestory was just simply awesome

and great sex. 5 stars. on the the last chapter. i hope it ends well!

Ok that’s it, got it. Now let’s get to the end with Jeff and Dawn hooked up and her pregnant.

So far so good. I don't know why you had to go and make the prequel for this so violent and dark. This one is halfway decent.

Screw the uneducated sex seekers best yet in this story

It's all there. The setup is ripe. Please don't ruin it in the final part. Give them their happiness together! Well, here's hoping... *starts reading the final chapter*