All Comments on 'Lighten Up Ch. 01'

Cant wait to see what happens when he goes home! What a hot slut!

The first chapter was really good, can't wait for more.

Still come back to reread this series every few months. My favorite in Literotica. Love the characters and love the dirty talk between them - always a favorite. Would still enjoy seeing more stories but understand that may not appeal. But thanks for these!

Ten stars!!!

1) You spelled wrack correctly.

2) Your grammar was mostly correct.

3) Your punctuation was mostly correct.

4) My grandfather was a Tent Meeting Evangelist, and, growing up, I had religion shoved down my throat until it gagged me.

I was forced to go to Sunday school AND church every Sunday. HOWEVER, I did something no good church goer should do-- not only did I listen to the sermons, I evaluated what was being said.

When I was about 12, one Sunday I said to myself {the 12 y. o. version of} "this is BULLSHIT" and walked out in the middle of the sermon. I have NEVER been to church since.

Well written !!!!! ; )

Extremely HOT & a well developed, well paced, "believable" sequence of events.

Well done, sir.