All Comments on 'Lighten Up Ch. 02'

good story, well written but, like so many, its too damn long!

Well written and maybe long, but you carried it on well. only saw two place where you must have been to involved in the story to notice you forgot who was who.

Better then I could do though. Bravo!

If you all are looking for a quick wank, go find a different story. Willy - keep up the good work.

I guess story length is a matter of personal taste. Yours is shorter than many I've enjoyed on literotica, and I eagerly anticipate your next installment. Make them as long as you like as long as you keep my attention I'm good. If the story gets too short it'll end too soon and I'll have to go looking for another. That would be like premature ejaculation.

Please continue, this is a great story so far and look forward reading more.

It's hot and sexy, that's what matters. I love your stories! Such delightful dirty talk. Keep it up!

Would love to read more

Lots more please.

BEST VIRGIN STORY. Hope we will see Rachel next.

Awesome story. Wish I knew an April. What will Lilly do next?

This was hot! Can't wait to see what's next? How filthy can this family be?! Keep it up! Made my pussy wet.....

Always happy to have more suggestions on what depraved acts you want to see, either in comments or in messages! Thanks for reading!