All Comments on 'Lighthouse'

Great, very sexy story. Please write more.

Hot, regular folks, having a wild time. Imagination enhanced, for sure. But aren't those the best? Where something sexy can be imagined to have gone further, and you can see what might have been, if only.

Thanks for posting, and well done.

This was fun to read, true?, who know or cares.

Very fun story to read... It was nice everyone just sort of let things go and went with the flow...it turned out great!!

Good premise.

Sex is too automatic. Starts too suddenly. Lacks details.

Four stars.

Well, I'm sure you'll never see this. But, maybe don't be anonymous and send a link to your writing so we can see how the pros do it.