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by hidanwriter

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Editor required

Your story would be enhanced by proper grammar, spelling, etc. It was very distracting and I couldn't finish it. Normally I would have enjoyed this story. A proof reader would be awesome.

hidanwriterhidanwriterover 14 years agoAuthor
soon to be edited

this sub is soon to be edited for better grammer and spelling whne i get a reply from an editor

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