All Comments on 'Like a Rolling Stone'

You write really well and have great story lines but you move way too fast. Slow the action and the scenes down. Take your time, you are really good and you can be so much better.

In a short story so much has to happen doesn't it. Harder than a long one in a sense. However, your talent and imagination is very strong and each will strengthen with experience.

Nice work and thanks for a touch of the reality of life and choices. It's refreshing here.

with high Regard