by NoraBarnacle
World seems expansive and you are telling us just a friction of it in this sex filled to the rim story.
I think Eiri is an incubus in human disguise like you told us about demons feeding on innocent boys' souls. I imagined him like Jekyll and Hyde two persons sharing one body.
Anyway even tho I'm not in to this whole bdsm stuff it was still an enjoyable read.
I can only say again what I said about the first chapter. This a great story and I’m really enjoying it even though I’m not a sci-if fan. Terrific imagination and you make it easy for the reader to see the images in their own mind.