by NoraBarnacle
Bravo, one of my favorite stories :)
But, unless I missed it, why doesn't she turn Eiri into a vampire and then they could be together forever?
I think Daddy might have some harsh things to say about making a vampire out of the equivalent of a one night stand, the morning after. Perhaps there is an intermediate state, where The Prospect’s longevity is greatly increased, to give him more time to prove himself?
As I’ve said previously I’m not a sc-if fan but this story has enthralled me and I think you’ve finished it at exactly the right time with the reader wanting more. Not necessarily more of Eiri and Noth but more from you as a writer. To paraphrase a film title we got the bad,then the ugly and finally the good and I would have been disappointed if you had written anything other than a happy ending.
As for Noth turning Eiri into a vampire that’s something that’s best left to our imagination.
It surely must be a good recommendation when someone who doesn’t normally like sci-fi stars a story 5-5-3-5-5. I sincerely hope that this isn’t a one-off and you’ve got something else in progress because I would love to read more of your imagination.
I randomly stumbled upon this story while searching for another. While I usually don't read BDSM stories, the high score and the description tempted me. While I can't say I loved the BDSM theme itself, I really liked the world building. I suggest if you write other stories, keep it in this post-crisis world. 5*
What an amazing read! My only regret is I started reading in the morning right before work, and then the day was completely unproductive, because I wanted to get back home to finish reading. I'm definitely into sci/fi and definitely interested in learning more about bdsm, so this was exactly what I was looking for! Great universe!