by BethB
Hot storyline! I'm looking forward to subsequent chapters.
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The image of your protagonist tied and blindfolded with legs spread having her shaved vulva parted to reveal pretty pink flesh is very stimulating. She seems to relish the thoughts of it, too.
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I wish you'd have described in greater detail her bathing and shaving process. Inquiring minds want to know -- and know more. ;-)
Part of a story is just that... part of a story. It is not a whole story or even a story worth taking the time to read.
Beth...first time reader, will check more! Great story! Am loving the panty trading and fetish ideas! May need to get a pair on!
This is the kind of story that will draw us in and make us all come back for more. The anticipation of what will happen left me breathless and I found myself wondering, hoping and wishing someone was taking my panties. the thought of a man holding my wet panties next to his face is just too much. Beth, I love your style and the way your details make it believeable and vivid. I loved the part where the men were talking on the phone and she was listening. What woman wouldn't let her hubby have her panties?
Beth - I hope there are many more chapters to this story. What a great start. You must be hot! I wish I was Jim's friend and your neighbor.
Beth - I hope there are many more chapters to this story. What a great start. You must be hot! I wish I was Jim's friend and your neighbor.
Super hot and well written story. Had to read it several times to make sure I did not miss any details.
Can't wait to read the next part of the story.
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Just found this story. WOW!!! Wish I'd found it sooner. SO HOT!
Gotta read the rest.
while not kink of mine appreciate the strong bonds/love between the two of them, and both getting off multiple times