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Click here“No.”
“Where’s Izzy?”
“Dad took her to the store. She wanted some robot pony they keep advertising on TV.” She didn’t make any response, though he could see she was pulling food out to cook. “You were gone awhile,” he commented, eyes flicking over her disheveled appearance. Surprisingly she was again mute. She was usually easy to provoke, and her lack of response put him on edge. She probably had a headache; that would explain a lot. “Oh, and you got a package,” he mentioned offhandedly.
She paused in her chopping, raising an eyebrow. “Did you open it?”
“No, it’s still in the hall.”
She never got packages, and he had admittedly scoped it out, considering opening it then resealing it. His father had brought it from the post office, and unfortunately had been nearby or Gabriel might have done just that. Fortunately after a few hours of considering it, logic had won out curiosity.
“Bring it to me.”
Normally he would have made some smart ass comment, but he found himself curious. Would she open it in front of him? There was the chance that it was something stupid and insignificant, which would explain her lack of concern about him seeing the contents. He rose to go get it, throwing one last wayward glance at her, but she wasn’t paying attention.
The box was rectangular and at least three times longer than it was wide. It was strangely narrow, which had piqued his interest. It was heavier than it looked, but not so much as to be cumbersome. When he came back and set it on the island, she turned to him, crossing her arms on the marble, bloody knife still in hand. He watched her tap the tip on the dark counter, the sound metallic and somewhat foreboding. He set it down in front of her, pulling at his shirt unconsciously. She pushed the knife across the counter at him suddenly, the blade scraping at the marble. Gabriel eyed it warily, though his right hand had reached up automatically to finger the handle.
“It’s for you. Open it.”
- COMMENTS
Foxterot7aabout 1 year agoThere is more complex character development in this story than I would ever expect from an author on this site. This is a most welcome change. This author knows how to develop a character and a twisted plot. Whenever the sex arrives, it will be anticlimatic. So far there is a dominate mother, eunuch husband/father, a son who is going to become self-aware, self-confident and once he realizes who he is, he will be unstopable, and a typical young daughter. This is what erotic literature is suppose to be.
Tony Strokesover 11 years agoThough I'm intrigued by the characters, I have to say the only problem I have with the story is that you take forever with it. Don't get me wrong, I quite enjoy lengthy stories and I'm certainly not one of these people looking for sex in the first 3 pages. But I like to know that the story I'm reading is actually going some where plot-wise. I'm not getting that feeling here though, it just feels like the plot has stalled and you're rehashing the same point over and over again, that being the Mom and Son don't get along. I think we all got that at this point, so I'm just wondering at what point will this plot take a step forward?
BillyName99over 11 years agoI like the fact that you are not concerned if everyone 'likes' your characters.
Keep going, I can't wait to see what happens!
Pilot4029over 11 years agoThis story is better than 90% of M/s stories out there. Keep going! Pilot4029 x
Anonymousover 11 years agoIt's an intriguing set of characters, though as you mentioned, not very likable. However, the dynamic makes zero sense. Why is the old man with this woman? Why is she grooming her son into a killer or a cuckold (or both?)? A multitude of other questions pop up with no answers in sight.
The father/daughter in particular make no sense though. The guy must realize his son and wife make for a very bad environment for his daughter to grow up in.
DarkSammaelover 11 years agoAuthorI don't think I ever went into writing this thinking, "I'm going to make these characters that everybody likes." In fact, it was more or less the opposite. People are selfish, obsessed, and flawed; they are also kind, loving, and selfless. No one bothers to talk about the darker side of reality, because it's easier to write something with some kind of beacon of hope. And with erotica, forget it. Quick and easy is the name of the game. I get that. So it makes sense that people aren't going to like it, because it's not typical, it's depressing, and that's not very palatable to read for a lot of people. Everyone is entitled to their opinion, and I'm glad that some of you have felt like saying something about it, and I will keep it in mind for other things that I write.
As it is, both characters are selfish. They are very much alike, hence the title. The son sees his mother in a flattering light, despite his hatred of her. I'm exploring the idea of that godliness that parents have for us when we're young. They can be dreadful people, but when they clothe you and take care of you even in a neglectful way, children can often see them as greater than life, even if it is far from the truth. It's sad, but a reality for some. In the end, my characters are so flawed that it becomes hard to see any good in them. They are easy to hate, and I won't say they are misunderstood, because they aren't. They are by most standards, not exactly the best of people. But even the cruel have a story, even if we don't always want to hear it.
----The author
Anonymousover 11 years agothat it gets better . These 2 people . Mother and son are two really messed up people . I kind of feel sorry for the son . It really sucks not having a mother to love or be loved . The little girl Izzy i hope does not turn out like her mom .That would be a shame.
Anonymousover 11 years agoI remember the first part and have to say this part isn't any better. I just don't get it. There isn't anything hot about it.
LordSlamdawggover 11 years agoI can only see the mother & son pairing up as a exercise in mutual selfservice-flagellation. One could say that these 2 self absorbed people ' deserve' each other.
