All Comments on 'Like Much In (My) Life Ch. 05-06'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
i love this

i do love this story so far.. i think its really wonderful and I love the fact that when you post .. you post a lot.. wonderful story so far cant wait to find out what happens next..

knightofheartsknightofheartsabout 15 years ago
Wonderful

If you will excuse my language fan - fucking - tastic. Shades of Oblimo w/ a helping of whitesabre. Loved it, keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
fantastic!!!

This story is so good, it keeps drawing me in for more...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
fantastic!!!

More! please more!.....i love the characters in this story, it makes it addictive i can't wait to read more,like seriously!!

_Adriana__Adriana_about 15 years ago
haha

Thanks, love your sense of humour, Nice characters, really good story.

P.S. I wouldn't be eager to become a that kind of princess, me? jewels, clothes, a lot of people dying to do what I say? nah!! hahaha

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Lovely writing

I love your narrative voice. It's personal, funny, evocative. You're not only a writer, you're also a storyteller. The one switch to Ray's POV bothered me. His POV would be better done with dialogue, I think, so you can stay in first person. You've got to stop trusting your spell checker to recognize the difference between homonyms. ;) Don't quit.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Wonderful Story!

Can't wait to hear how they resolved their issues!

Jade1Tiger7Jade1Tiger7about 14 years ago
Please Finish, I beg of you!

This is the second time I have read these chapters because I got tired of waiting for the new posts. Also, I thought "why not read them and refresh my memory of the plot line?" Now, I am no accomplished writer but my mind keeps wondering as to how this story will unfold, and I am waiting on pins and needles, all over again I might add, for the next chapters. Please finish this story, I beg of you! Put me out of my agony!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Please finish!

Will you ever finish this story? It's great!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
pleeease more

This is the funniest, best written story I have read in a while. Please post more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
PLEASE!!!!!!!

Please finish your stories!!!

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