by RejectReality
That was really fun, thanks for writing it. I agree with the last comment, a second part would be great. Maybe he gets a turn with Jeanie as well? Or a threesome with her and Gayle? ;)
What a hot writer....
It does deserve a sequel. I hope that Nancy catches them....
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two talons up!
I hope that they get caught by MORE than just Nancy! Just think about Ann and Jeanie - Bike Ride Miles for Cancer -- how about - Screams for Cancer? !!!
I would love to read more about their continuing romance. Well composed.
I'm a big fan of your "mature" and "milf" stories. Like most of your stories, this one deserves a sequel.
I liked reading about a mother having her daughter’s rejected lover. I did something like this, I fucked a younger girl’s mother years after moving out of their neighborhood. Her husband had died in a motorcycle accident. She was a lonely widow who needed someone and I wanted an older woman. I think she, Linda, told her daughter about our encounter. During sex she clawed my chest while riding me asking if I liked her daughter. I admitted I did not because the daughter rejected me. Imagine a woman riding and asking about her daughter while making the bottom twitch with every squeezing his nipples.... I took over and gave her carpet burns driving across the floor when I pounded into her to make her know what a man can do. Write about ”mother fucked” so I know you understand this note.
The “Nude Day” premise made sense. More often than not, it’s an awkward addition to Lit Stories. Having the action take place around a Nudist Camp doing a charity fund raiser was good.
The characters are likable and sexy. Nancy was too much of a bitch. But...oh, well. A sequel would be nice, but not necessary. Still, lots of potential!
with her friend and the permutations that might include might well be a nice follow on.
Not if it does not flow with enjoyed sexuality though.
Without some care it would detract from the first three page in the story!