All Comments on '...Like Their Lives Depended On It'

by randydaughterreborn

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Haggisbasher59Haggisbasher59about 6 years ago
Nice story.

I enjoyed the story, maybe you could expand it to take in times after the initial event.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
This is not new

This story has been out there for years.

SexlessStiffSexlessStiffabout 6 years ago
Decent writing.

The story was a bit rushed, no build, it was just there.

DohcdaveDohcdaveabout 6 years ago
Comfort?

C................O............M.............Fuck,My, Oh My, finishing can keep us entwined for quite a while! 😁

blackknight314blackknight314about 6 years ago
Another great story!

***** I loved it. This was a great stand alone story but it lends itself to a longer piece as well. Good job.

Omart57Omart57about 6 years ago
Short and

straight to the point ! Very hot, I loved it!

BobossweetnessfreakBobossweetnessfreakabout 6 years ago
I thought...

I thought that in the end it would turn out to be the husband/dad pretending to be a burglar so he could watch his wife and son have sex. Nice story. Hmmmm a part 2 coming maybe??

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Really?

'inside her, where she'd held him for nine months and pushed him out 19 years ago'

Did we really need to know that?

Most people understand where babies come from so just concentrate on the sex.

TheOldStudTheOldStudalmost 2 years ago

Nicely written, At first, I thought that Peter may hired the masked invaded so he could screw his mother...

JustmeWBJustmeWBover 1 year ago

randydaughterreborn,

Another one so well done, and written.

I really thought he'ld find his Dad having a Beer at the kitchen table,

and the Mask would be laying in front of him.

MMMM, it could still happen? lol!

Do you have an email address?

Thanks again, for the fun ride,

WB

encore769encore76910 months ago

almost like a fantasy. Maybe it was?

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Like JustmeWB I too thought that the burglar would turn out to be Peter's dad. But that would have been rather too kinky. But the sex was too abrupt, too much of a wham bam thank you ma'am type. And it's not possible for the mother to get aroused and enjoy the sex unless she had been flirting with her son already and had the idea of sex with him in her mind. And you should have added a sequel where they would try out all positions and all holes without any guilt and without coercion.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Needs a sequel like what happened after that did they mom accidentally get pregnant with her son baby or something else happened because it’s really confusing when you never said anything about the mom being on birth control or anything else so did they have a baby together because of that fateful moment or not I’m confused even though I don’t think that should be added but still confused

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(RETIRED FROM WRITING AS OF MAY 2018) Australian author. Early 30s. Feminist. Not single, so don't hit on me. But please do tell me if you enjoyed my stories, or not - I am open to *constructive* criticism. I try to have realistic characters in my stories - well, as realisti...