by elleVeut
I love how your story is all about the emotion of D/s. Sasha is a beautiful, complex character whose life experiences and situation you weave into her feelings and attraction to Elliot. The dialogue is tack sharp, and a lesson in how to do it well. Beautiful writing, elleVeut,
It paints such a vivid picture of both characters. I’ve never had an author come so close to describing the feeling of a really intense scene
This is so beautifully written. I was so happy to find something this perfect on Literotica today.