All Comments on 'Like Wildfire'

by elleVeut

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visioneervisioneerover 6 years ago
Excellent

I love how your story is all about the emotion of D/s. Sasha is a beautiful, complex character whose life experiences and situation you weave into her feelings and attraction to Elliot. The dialogue is tack sharp, and a lesson in how to do it well. Beautiful writing, elleVeut,

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Amazing

It paints such a vivid picture of both characters. I’ve never had an author come so close to describing the feeling of a really intense scene

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Amazing

This is so beautifully written. I was so happy to find something this perfect on Literotica today.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Wowza this is so hot!! Excellent writing.

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