All Comments on 'Lilac's 18yo Friend: Vivian Swings'

Too much long .otherwise thrilling and cock raising. I fucked my BF 3 times reading the story

too repetitive. no emotion at all in the sex. the high school slut is a caricature of some sick guy's dream girl. oh, and by the way--we don't have to be told how old she is every other sentence.

and the dialog, such as it is, sounds like a recording from a video game.