All Comments on 'Lila's First Threesome'

Five *

Lila is a good slut, she will make someone a very good wife.

You DEFINITELY enjoy being a girl! Combine that with an excellent writing ability and you have very readable stories, much better than most!

Lila is quite the unapologetic slut and I love her already. I would never do a mmf

threesome but I'd sure like to have a romp with her at the beach or in the mountains or at the desert. She's the kinda girl I love to spend a LOT of time with. I"ll bet she could be turned into a best-selling novel on her own.

Good story. I gave it a 5 . . . . again.

Worthless whore

I was expecting her to take both of them at the same time. One in the front and the other in the backend. Would have been a better story. The picture taking ruined it for me. It makes her a slut when he shows them around and he will.

Interesting story with a unique plot twist, with a sensuous woman, hot sex, exceptionally well-written with all the elements of good style. Kudos to you! 5 Stars & well earned.

Pretty unrealistic. Leads me to believe you are male--so write what you know1 You changed point of view from first person to third several times, sorry, but grade school grammar mistakes turn me off.