All Comments on 'Lilith Shorts: A Night with Tinera Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
New it, pathetic

It has gotten to the point where the entertainment in the stories has disappeared and the reader will know what will happen. I didn't even read the full story I knew he was going to die. You need to do something about this or your going to lose readers.

ender2k2kender2k2kalmost 6 years ago
Dealing with Nissera is a dangerous game.

Good story. Thanks.

SouthernPassion53SouthernPassion53almost 6 years ago
Lol. Good response.

Good response

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Have a lot of strange fantasies, just throwing them out there for others to enjoy. Also I know my Grammar isn't perfect and I an constantly trying to improve it. Also to help because the site organizes my stories in a confusing way. Mood slime: to read the series in order it...