All Comments on 'Lilith's Emporium: Demon G/F Ch. 01'

I'm so glad you're writing longer pieces now! I like your writing and stories but I find they are usually much too short for my liking. Keep up the good work!

Despite the entertaining stories, starting this one of with a variation of the worst opening line ever, "It was a dark and stormy night" really was a distraction for me. Fun stories but, at this point in your popularity, you should be able to find an editor to clean things up.

Ryan No!

This was spectacular, I loved it and hopefully await the next part, as well as more stories, keep up the out of this world work!

I'm actually surprised that you decided to write something that did not involve the main characters being forced into death or being turned into something. This piece was really good and I hope you continue it. Don't care about the grammar mistakes that some nuts decide to point out. Hopefully it turns into a love story and not something like that other lilith's story that you finished recently. If it turns into another one of those, then its a waste of a good story.

this is a master piece i have no words for this the feeling the story, the weird fantasy, it the best one of the best things ive ever read on this site i cant wait for ch 2

Can't wait for part 2!

If you've ever read "Sentimental Succubus" this gave me very similar vibes, and that is a good thing.

Can't wait for part 2 <3

https://www.literotica.com/s/the-sentimental-succubus

It's more about love than raw sex, but if that's something you want it's 6 pages (^_^)

This is very interesting always love read what you do here

Ryan acted like any good man would, he freaked out. I'd have freaked out but, I'd have told her to stay, I just need some time alone, to lose my grip of reality for a bit.

I would have freaked out but since I believe most things are only what we make of them, as far as religion goes, I would not have told her to leave. Well, maybe. But probably not