All Comments on 'Lilith's Emporium: Demon G/F Ch. 02'

by maestro84

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DaCanadianDaCanadianalmost 6 years ago
15/10

Awesome followup to part one!

In a sea of stories that are just dom/sub stuff wholesome loving stuff like this is a treasure.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Enjoyable story, needs an editor for polish

Said it last time, before the comment was deleted. Your stories are very enjoyable and for the most part well written, but the minor typos are distracting.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Scarlett

You should keep her in your story and make her come around or a slave to them

LEONARDOU812LEONARDOU812almost 6 years ago
Love your stories

I consider my self lucky to have found your stories. I have read them all so far and look forward to many more enjoyable more of them.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
I’m speakless

This is everything I hoped from the request SOMTHING with the a nice guy gets a super sexy babe I’m so happy and lucky u did it I hope u do more with them as she can becoming different forms so that could be interesting

erebustitan43erebustitan43almost 6 years ago
that was kick ass!

Damn, you have a Knack for these stories.

DefileDefileover 5 years ago
More!

Please continue with this story. It's one of my favorites of yours.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
What defile said

Yeah there so much possible u could do with this with the shafting it be sexy as fuck to see what else she can do

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Have a lot of strange fantasies, just throwing them out there for others to enjoy. Also I know my Grammar isn't perfect and I an constantly trying to improve it. Also to help because the site organizes my stories in a confusing way. Mood slime: to read the series in order it...