All Comments on 'Lilith's Emporium Pt. 01: Night w/Nessira Ch. 01'

sequel please awesome story...

I love how the protagonist is written in a way that he seems human rather than a blank slate the reader can easily relate to.

This is a lot more natural and organic style of writing that is so rare to see around here.

A++ job friend, please keep writing more

Great story. I would love to be taken by Narissa but imagine if she had completely immobilized her victim with bondage and kept him as her personal pet for her orgasm after orgasm.

Ticklishsoles

He did not die in this one.

Could be much better if it was easier to read. The silly little errors detract from the reading experience. Proof reading should clear up almost all of these and improve the story immensely. If you are unwilling to get someone to help try text to speech and follow the story as it is read to you. Makes self editing easier.

I love this entire series! You do you a really good job at building the world and characters. Probably my favorite author on the site. Keep it up!

I am so happy you enjoy my stories, more to come.

Thanks for this link

I just want to add my experience on clits sucking: you can lightly put you teeeth around it and make sure you tongue it as you feel that rod come to life and now you have a brand new pussy for her and for you.

Third time I'm reading this series, never gets old!