All Comments on 'Lilith's Emporium: The Beast Within'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Fantastic

Loving this series! Please keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Wow

Would love more to this one maybe her unleashing his inner beast

darkdance69darkdance69over 6 years ago
Pretty good

I'm not a grammar cop, but it could have used some editing help. Especially when the BF's name kept swiching from Troy to Tony. I gave it 4 🌟's though.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

this is great but i have one question? who is rick and victoria? this is intresting

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Have a lot of strange fantasies, just throwing them out there for others to enjoy. Also I know my Grammar isn't perfect and I an constantly trying to improve it. Also to help because the site organizes my stories in a confusing way. Mood slime: to read the series in order it...