All Comments on 'Lilly the First'

Well done. Nice story without trying to do too much during the first experience.

Didn't get her off the first time, but the others plus going down on her should have got her off and let her cum.

Need to change your name, may aim to please but didn't.

Great sexual build up as in real life, with a conclusion that also so real. Could be the life's experience for many of your readers.

If not for STDs and unplanned babies, bareback is the bomb. Nice story by the way