All Comments on 'Lily & Celia'

great start. i would slow it down a little maby and longr is beter

really good start cant wait for the next chapter hope you will make it longer

You write it at the pace and content that suits you...it'll be fine.

MORE, MORE, MORE !!! That is so freaking hot it made me incredibly wet please write more I'm begging you.

This is a very good short story. It would have made for a greater story with some character development, build up & plot. I could see this being a great love story where heart broken straight girl meets beautiful lesbian, has sex, struggles with her sexuality & eventually finds herself in true love. But that's just my thought.

It's been like forever where is the next chapter at?

I really loved this story. If I had one complaint, it's that you should have continued it :D