All Comments on 'Lily & Stella'

Details! More details! This all happened a little too quick. You need to work on the pacing of events. Other than that, a decent story.

I liked the story and the descriptive elements show promise. You might want to embellish the details in places such as the "rough sex" Devon was supposed to have with you. What was up - spanking, tying, getting Lily involved ? But it is constructive criticism. Please write more. As an added bonus, the author is cute!

This belongs in the Group Sex section. Using the excuse that two woman fucked isn't good enough.