All Comments on 'Lily's Awakening Pt. 02'

When this girl finally has sex it's going to open a flood gate, can't wait to read it

Part 2 is even better than the first. I jerked both times and just can't wait for more. a few typos, but if the author is as turned on while writing, I can look past it.

Good job! Welcome to Lit!

I say when cousin Mike is well again and cast-free, bring his dark good looks to Lily and let them explore each other. He ought be a young man with some chest hair and muscles, and a big cock just waiting to be serviced!

Gay sex, kiddy porn and jerking people off.

Misuse of the dash. Use the speech marks, makes more sense.

Get an editor.

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