All Comments on 'Limelight'

Imagine a married couple enjoying each other and having adventures within their marriage. What a novel plot idea for LW! Well written and a fun read.

Thank you for a great read. tom anon

Great story !!

Loved it - made me laugh,well done !!

Thank you!!

Very good story, a TLC.

Need more of this!!!

Thank you!

M1

A delight in every possible way.

Viva el Amor! Cherchez la femme (pour couchez avec elle!)

Cinco (5) estrellas!

It just keeps getting better and better. When your work starts hitting the NY Times best seller lists I will look back and think "I remember when..."

645,897,101 STARS

OH YEAH

Bravo! Well done!

to replace the 7yr one, TK U MLJ LV NV

There's a veritable cavalcade of praise for this story and to a degree, I concur. Something is artificial here however & it's more then the Viagra. The wife is a bit of a follower in good ways & bad ones.

She takes impeccable care herself & looks out for her man - beautiful women after forty should be prized for the work ethic and genetic good fortune that make art in high heels. Bravo ! Still after twenty years - she skirted the precipice of swapping.

The husband took matters in hand and in tandem with the Viagra made his case. Yet if you have to persuade her after 2 decades you are the only one- are you really the only one ? Food for thought.

All is well- for now. To me, however, this story is not complete and the elements for mayhem are still present just as surely as something has gone a bit awry with their sons' registration in community college. No shame there but it's a sign for right now - things are in flux and the children/ the couple are finding their ultimate way.

There's no denying, however , the author drew me into the story. There was a precision how swap was approached, skirted and denied. Very nice ! The scene on the foreign beach was well ...whew. Enough said.

This is a five star story, perhaps not as emphatically and definitelly for different reasons them previous fellow commentators had.

...laughed at the (probably unintentional) double entendre in the typo " we must be a whole generator apart" and all in all it was a decent read.To give a story this short and simple a 5 seems to lower the bar a bit but it deserves a four. I was perplexed though that when tongue bathing her he referred to "previously unexplored territory". Really? And they've been married for twenty years? Totally incongruous to story.

...having fun without cheating on your partner!

Thanks for the good story.

is highly contagious, TK U MLJ LV NV

beautifully written.

Think not because you are now wed

That all your courtship's at an end.

[Antonio Hurtado de Mendoza]

Better than the first part. A truly loving wife tale.

Just another slut story.

several years tardy but better late than????????TK U MLJ LV NV

or as respectful of their twenty two year marital heritage. He should not be the only one on patrol of the boundaries.

vacations are nice when its All Inclusive. TK U MLJ LV NV

a very enjoyable tale, if not a bit odd.

and a good story about his wisdom.

Tell you what. You keep writing stories like these and I'll keep drinking them up like a parched man enjoying cold water in the hot desert. What say you, Strapper66?

Damnit I told you in my comment on the Aftermath that the wife would cross one of those lines you the writer refuse to cross. I should have made you a bet...😂 but way to bounce her ass back on track a 4am in the moaning 😂

He brought her back from the brink in .masterful way. Good follow up.

I loved this story and especially the way the protagonist brought his marriage back from the brink of disaster, well done.

Glad your wives aren't cheaters. He was right to NIP any bad thoughts she might get!!!

5 stars - I like this story