All Comments on 'Limitlessness of Limit'

by dhaka_1981

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
it was an Excellent story for a first time writer

Superb...

please keep wrting more

Jaya.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
excellent, would have been better --

excelent story. It would have been better if you put some "Bengali - Khisti--" during fucking.

Want more.

ScribblerosScribblerosabout 20 years ago
Hot Tale, but Proof Reading Required.

This is a hot and exciting story which has lost some of its effect. The story needs to be proof read and re-written.

Cheers,

Sam

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Best of breed

best i have read so far.. keep writing and keep up the good work!!

Ravi

getgaggedgetgaggedalmost 17 years ago
u rock..

hey thanx for this wonderful experience.. the way u have descirbed her she seems to be a very hot lady.. good going man.. would love tyo have more from u

bd645bd645almost 16 years ago
Bhishon Bhalo

Ekdom real life story! Bhishon bhalo legechhey... Aro likhun.. likhtey thakun.

English-ta ar ektu improve korttey parley bhalo hoy

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
want more

aro lekha chai, bangladeshi sex stories r really hot.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
wow...is this for real

You should have got someone to edit this.

Man, your Benglish sucks. So many spelling mistakes and poorly constructed sentences. Propositions are missing and tenses wrong at some place.

Get an editor Bro.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Superb...

The language may not be all that good but the thought process is simply excellent. Hats off to the writer...

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Are you from gendaria?

Are you from Rajani Chy Road gendaria?

joyshujoyshuabout 3 years ago

great story but the grammar sucks

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