by dhaka_1981
Superb...
please keep wrting more
Jaya.
excelent story. It would have been better if you put some "Bengali - Khisti--" during fucking.
Want more.
This is a hot and exciting story which has lost some of its effect. The story needs to be proof read and re-written.
Cheers,
Sam
best i have read so far.. keep writing and keep up the good work!!
Ravi
hey thanx for this wonderful experience.. the way u have descirbed her she seems to be a very hot lady.. good going man.. would love tyo have more from u
Ekdom real life story! Bhishon bhalo legechhey... Aro likhun.. likhtey thakun.
English-ta ar ektu improve korttey parley bhalo hoy
You should have got someone to edit this.
Man, your Benglish sucks. So many spelling mistakes and poorly constructed sentences. Propositions are missing and tenses wrong at some place.
Get an editor Bro.
The language may not be all that good but the thought process is simply excellent. Hats off to the writer...