All Comments on 'Limits'

I don't like the news media, but I was sad to see yet another professional corrupted. I didn't see the category when I clicked on this. I'm not a fan of BDSM. I see no point to inflicting pain on purpose. You yet again, Many Feathers, display a total disregard or maybe incompetance with respect to punctuation and , many times, spelling. You write good usually, but you really dropped the ball here.

Though it seems really odd, though, you really seem to like the word though. And though it is very appropriate in some cases, it is - though - never a good substitute for a comma or a period, though. Though I really like much of your work and though it very interesting, you need to get a good proofreader and though they might be a good friend you need to find someone who is competant with punctuation AND word usage. Though getting comfortable with sentence structure and how to help a story flow will be a big help though.