All Comments on 'Linda Morris - Lesbian Jailer'

An editor would correct the "before then" descriptions that hamper the flow of descriptive prose. Too much Thesaurus in your synonyms choices, not enough proper punctuation. If these were corrected, this would be "awful lesbian porn" instead of "poorly written awful lesbian porn". You, of course, have the right to spray your fantasy cum wherever you want, but this sort of story has nothing about it that lends itself to constructive feedback. This is just tawdry crap!

you wrote "you blew a one-point-one on the breathalyzer." She'd be dead if this were true. I think you wanted to say "you blew a .11. . ."

Hallo Dumpington!

With indifference to the last two assholes opinions.... I enjoyed reading your story very much.... Thank-You!

Gay Kat,

So taking advantage of her position of power.

I thought women were incapable of that.

Nice too see equal representation.