All Comments on 'Lindsay's First Time'

This story jumped way to quickly to sex. Needs a bit more development and inbetween to be a decent or even good story!

Nice theme but you forgot or didn't know that girls have hemens. When they first have sex you break it and they bleed a lil and thats why it hurts the first time girls have sex. Nice try kid...

the intro is good... but how come a succesful celebs just take off the shirt and proceed to do it... drag it out longer.. but not too long... a good work..keep it up..!!

Big fan of lindsay so i enjoyed it, yea they are right about the blood etc you need to show this or point out she broke it horse riding or something, none the les i enjoyedit, jus slow down a bit :-)

Should emphasized more on the breast as she have magnificent ones. i guess. i like a little rougher sex. but anyway, this is a great story and i love it! keep up the good work

She pulls a stranger into her room to lose her virginity? Come on guys! The point of this story is that Lindsey is a slut, that's why she didn't bleed. This guy is lucky, but not that lucky!

I agree with the last comment but i think she should be less sluttier and just be more "girl next door " type

person and also get her to be enlitened by her for instance a rober tries to molest her and tada the main charature comes to the reascue and saves her more

compeling u think

I agree with the last comment but i think she should be less sluttier and just be more "girl next door " type

person and also get her to be enlitened by her for instance a rober tries to molest her and tada the main charature comes to the reascue and saves her more

compeling u think

the best story on here

i wack off to lindsay all the time and this made me blow the biggest load yet

lindsey is the sexiest 1 n hollywood

You should have taken your time explaining things more. It moves on too quickly. Hope you write more stories though because i enjoyed reading this 1. Keep up the good work

the one thing i love about linds is her red hair not one comment on the infamous firecrotch lets not forget shes irishly delicious

Hemens? They have tons of Hemans in their pussies? You mean Hymen. A Hymen can be broken numerous ways, INCLUDING FROM A TAMPON. Nice try kid. Also, Lindsay Lohan.. a virgin, that's believable.. /sarcasm

Haha if you have an iPod Touch or iPhone, download "type n talk" in the app store and copy and paste these stories on there. It's hilarious.(:

that really cool to have lindsey take you to her hotel l have respect for lindsey for going thorough that bullshit she took