by AliceShayne
I read this and was rock solid like all good V stories impact. Slightly surreal if you think about it. However a bug bear haunted from the start. It has a male ownership respective. Dated. Some girls still hide behind modesty, but few. She needed to more own her sexuality and who she was doing this for, or have a valhala or Lyndhala moment in the act itself. Even if we take as given his Sexperience. Or especially so. The story would be more sexy and mod challenging if she realised the sex, like the waiting had been exactly the right decision for HER. And more moment.