All Comments on 'Line of Sight'

by MarciaRH

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

You call Michael Ken towards the end and it ends too abruptly but was a good story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
What a terrific story!

Best writing I've seen here in a long time. (and she calls Michael Ken because Michael is Ken.)

wirepullerwirepullerabout 12 years ago
excellent story

you described that seemingly impossible act perfectly.

roveroneroveroneover 4 years ago
Fun horny girl...tho her paranoia a bit off-putting...

buns up kneeling, stuffed...kind of woman I like...comfortable w/pleasure rump rogering offers....

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