All Comments on 'Linger'

Well done and open ended. Can other writers play with these characters? Write their own stories around this one?

Thanks for the story, again very well done.

This is one of my new favorites. You do a great job with the imagery—we're really put into the scene with the protagonist as she struggles to wake up. That was basically me this morning, minus the overtones. TGI...T? Shit. :P

A friend of mine asked me to read this, and I have to say it is delicious. I love the careful word craft. Well done.

I should have made clear, that it was more than a friend who recommended it. It was my lovely girlfriend.

I this could go a bit longer. . .

Thank You

HP