All Comments on 'Lip and Annie Ch. 01'

really a great great story. read it on another site...

it is just BULLY!

So, what was in her purse, pepper spray ( I gave that to my daughters). Sounds like you will develop this later on and I look forward to reading about it!

-ttom

Loved the poker jargon & irganically building detail of two main characters. No fuss, no rush - the author makes it look easy . Which it most certainly is not.

Am I on the right track?

Her sexual abuse

Purse gun

Him overly sensitive to face

Excellent set up - I just hope the rest of the story proves to be as good or better. One thing, writers (not only this author, but so many others) need to learn the difference in "your" and "you're". Your is a possessive and should not be used where "you are" is meant. And "you're" should never be used in a place where the thing or person described belongs to "you."