All Comments on 'Lip and Annie Ch. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Better and Better!

In my opinion, most "conflicts" in a story are pretty contrived. This one felt real. I think that the guy being 62 and gay was a bit over the top. However, I really felt for Robert thinking that Annie may be moving on, only seeing him as a friend. I look forward to the next chapter, thanks!

-Ttom

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