All Comments on 'Lip and Annie Ch. 07'

Very little tension and mystery. I still enjoy the story, but I don't look for it with the same anticipation I felt for your other stories. Yes, it is a romance, but a romance can have strong elements of tension, mystery, resolution, discovery, etc. Sure, there is tension given the background issues with each person, and some mystery about what happened to her, but these are like gentile waves, nothing really difficult to resolve or find out.