All Comments on 'Lip and Annie Ch. 10'

by jake60

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Great

This has been a most wonderful story.

Boyd

WILLACWILLACalmost 14 years ago
Thanks

Great story line and well presented in a short format.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
NIce story

Not convoluted and pretty predictable, but it is nice to just read a pleasant romance story that wanders along to the happily ever after conclusion.

LakesLakesalmost 14 years ago
Nice story, but slow

Not up to your normal standard. I know it's a love story, but a bigger context could have created a bigger playing field and more tension, more interest,

AzPilotAzPilotalmost 14 years ago
A nice conclusion to a nice story--

Thank you sir, for a very entertaining time. I enjoyed the story and looked forward to each chapter. I wasn't disappointed.

acgolfacgolfalmost 14 years ago
Sensitive Treatment of Sensative Subjects

Well written, good read, great story thread. I will be looking for your future posts.

Thanks for Sharing

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Touching, heartwarming story

Thanks for a story with so much compassion.

rdd1953rdd1953over 13 years ago
Very Good

i must say i believe to be a good writer you have to be at least 60. i have read the first few of your stories and found all of them to be very tasteful and wonderful reads.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Fantastic story

One of the best, enjoyable read.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
There Is Always a Perfect Someone Out There

What a beautiful story regarding a couple that was destined to be! If only all of us could become this fortunate.

ricksouzaricksouzaalmost 12 years ago
Great Job

I couldn't put it down, so to speak.

Karavas41Karavas41almost 11 years ago
Terrific heartwarming story

Loved every line of it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
YES!

A wonderful worthwhile story. A few holes 'here 'n there' but very enjoyable.

gatorhermitgatorhermitover 9 years ago
Strange only 13 comments - this is a good romantic series

Very good character development. Logically consistent plot and likable characters. Well done!

pumpop201pumpop201over 9 years ago
Wonderful

Thanks for a wonderful story.

JohnSpiritWolfJohnSpiritWolfover 7 years ago
Amazing Story...

This was an amazing story on sooooo many different levels, BRAVO to our scribe...

Thank You for Sharing Your Talents with us. :)

Ocker51Ocker51almost 7 years ago
A Love Story

I usually am not into romantic stories but I got to say this was well worth the read. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

xtchrxtchrabout 6 years ago
The True Meaning Of Love!

Yes, this was a very good love story. This story took 2 broken people and let them fix each other. It proves that the whole is more than the sum of the parts.

Yes, the story was a little slow going for awhile but it succeeded in capturing my interest. I was rooting for both of these fine people. Thank you for a very entertaining and enjoyable story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
NICE.

ACTUALLY FUKIN SU-BLOODY-PERB. JUST5*****.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
A Really Fine Piece of Literature

This was a difficult story to write considering the subject matter. This story should be on everyone's read list. The writing is at a pace that the subject matter deserves. It is not rushed but tracks the emotional level very well. Another thing Jake60 does extremely well is convey realistic images along with the story. Thanks for a wonderful story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Ranks as one of the best stories I have read. Not too long and broken down to easily read portions. Great job! 5 stars

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I really enjoyed your story. Thank you!

LanmandragonLanmandragon5 months ago

The story is long, but it didn’t seem that way. Congratulations on a very sensitive and believable handling of a difficult subject.

34dein34dein3 months ago

Great story, I would gladly watch it if it were to be made into a movie or a short series

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