All Comments on 'Lisa And I Find Each Other Ch. 02'

More this. Waiting next part

Nicely done.

Certainly hope there isn't another 4 month wait!

SOON PLEASE LOVED IT.

What a great story the sex was hot and nasty i just loved it when is next part can hardly wait THANKS again

if you can't finish it DON'T START IT. either finish it, get a ghost writer to finish it or delete all stories and stop posting until you grow up enough to post complete stories.

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Oooh damn! Two year old cliffhanger, lol! I'll be wondering on that the rest of the night, hehehe. Well the upside to just now finding this story is that I (hopefully) won't have as long to wait for the next installment ;)

Thanks for the enjoyable read!

Hmmm...

Will you marry me

Exit only big brother

Stretch it before entering

Use lots more lube

Use Astroglide next time

Lets move in together

Make babies with me

How about double penetration

My strap-on, your ass

Hehehe, this is fun!

You'd have got 5 stars if only you'd finished it properly instead of leaving us hanging.

Rapier

Ok...what are the FOUR WORDS???

I HOPE YOU ADD ANOTHER CHAPTER INCLUDING THOS WORDS

it's been 4+ years - we need chapter 3. great, sexy well-written fun story - but its not done!!! PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE finish it. PLEASE!!!!

I went back and reread Ch 1 after being annoyed by your slang dialog in this chapter. "Wanna" "are ya" "somethin'" In Ch 1 he was in college and she was a high school senior, in this chapter they sound like hillbillies.

If you transcribe spoken speech the way most Americans actually speak, you will write in a dialect such as I have chosen. I graduated from a professional school with honors and I do not enunciate the Queen's English in my casual conversation, though I can speak as well as write with great command of the English language.

People do not really say, "Sister, I want to place my penis in your vagina." If YOU talk that way, you are in a very circumscribed minority. Most people would actually say, "Sis, I wanna stick my dick in your pussy!"

While incest stories are fantasy, I try to make my stories as realistic as possible, and that means that I will use spoken vernacular. That is my choice as an author and I readily accept the fact that I cannot please everyone.

You've got me hooked! I need a third chapter, to see those 4 words, a little more character development, and where they go from here. It's exciting and beautiful, but I don't feel I know them well and would enjoy being in their heads, seeing them as people just a bit more. But, just the right amount of slutty talk, normal sized "junk", and I too, like smaller titties. Thanks.

We NEED a Chapter 3 PLEASE! It's been 4+ years.

I hope you continue. I know that an 18 and 20 year old find it difficult to become Husband and Wife, but this story is perfect. You have 2 siblings that are not huge cock and big tits, but lovers.

Maybe they can move in together for a few years and become one.

A lovely story. Please don't hold us out!

YUK, another gay story...

Great story,always HOT between a bro and sis,chapter 3 please,I take it as an insult that authors dont finish stories,the authors get the readers hooked with a story THEN just petters out without a finish.

Oh you tease. More please. You have to finish this. Is Lisa knocked up already? PLEASE don't do this to your loyal readers.

I love tiny tits, I always have and always will.