All Comments on 'Lisa Ch. 01: The Escape'

by JadenL

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Well then...

I don't think I'd like anyone of them 'Sept for Jimmy boy

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Book Haram

Competently written. I'm willing to see how it turns out but the theme is very NC rather than R. Try reinterpreting it with Boko Haram for the survivalists and a Nigerian schoolgirl for Lisa/Jessica to see what I mean.

Clipsparapapel17Clipsparapapel17about 6 years ago
FELLOW READERS!!! DO NOT READ THIS IF YOU DISLIKE UNFINISHED STORIES

This story, like so many on this site, is unfinished...And based on the fact that the last chapter was submitted 4 yrs ago, it's unlikely that status will change. Just warning ya...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
I remember more...

What happened to the beginning of the story?? And finish it please

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