All Comments on 'Lisa Ch. 08a: Evil'

Why is literotica holding out on parts b and c?

when it comes to this story I am a very impatient woman.

I think it's because it's a lot of reading for them too. Hopefully at least b will be up soon.

Thanks for you support:)

Wherefore art thou Scotty?

so fucking hot. Love this story!

I love this story. Please keep the vaulter coming and I admire how many pages you put into each chapter. Thanks a lot!!!

I am really enjoying your story. In the future you might want to do more research on your medical information. As a medical professional it kinda puts a damper on those areas for me. Much of your information is wrong. I do love the story though...keep up the good work!

Hi,

yes, I honestly did not spend much time on the medical facts for sure. If you have any specifics that you'd like to share with me I'd be truly appreciative. My email is jadenl@hotmail.ca

Thanks for you feedback and please keep in touch as the story progresses.

Jaden:)

I really love this story ...

I'm really enjoying the characters you have created, especially how Angus has come around.

But, please, people patrol a perimeter not a parameter.

Keep up the great work!

Good catch, sorry totally missed parameter/perimeter ... meant perimeter for sure.

Thanks!

JadenL

I'M DYING HERE. WHEN WILL SHE FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENED TO HER GOD FATHER (uncle)?!?!?