All Comments on 'Lisa - Destiny Unfolding'

by AussieOwen

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subguythomassubguythomasover 12 years ago
Great start!!!

Love the premise of blackmailer using a couple against each other.

Please continue...you have a fan.

newuser1newuser1over 12 years ago
Great character development

Love how the whole revenge thing got turned around and instead of getting her revenge yet she gets two subs. I do hope she works out how to get revenge and her job advancement.

Scotsman69Scotsman69over 12 years ago
A good start

Thank you

AussieOwenAussieOwenover 12 years agoAuthor
Part 2

Thankyou for reading Part 1 and posting the comments and ratings.

Outline for Part 2 has started, should be up early next year.

Have Fun

Owen

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