by MONALISALEE
another story, you will never get a score lower than 1 on another story... because this is as bad as you can get. and anyone who gives a higher score either can't read or didn't read or attempt to read this crap.
No Score
english is terrible. Understandable for not being your native tongue. i should commend you for your efforts, but i wont as this topic offends me. Yes Im a troll, and I do this alot, even though I am on a stroke site. Im a killjoy and like to disturb the perverted fantasies of others and someone has to bring these guys back to reality.
Terrible writing skills. Thoroughly unlikable characters doing unbelievable, stupid things. One of the wort stories in a long time and that's saying a mouthful.
No stars as even giving this drivel one star would be an insult to the star. This type of story is the reason we need negative stars.
He reads all of theses This is chapter 5 asshole of LIT!!!!