All Comments on 'Lisa's Pleasure Spree Through Town'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Always a need for a belt. It just looks better.

Please, give the ex a name, even if it's ASOL.

fun story. I sort of liked this.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
past/present

Drop the 'was' for 'is'.

"I had C cups,"

The story is what happened this morning. If you had C cups this morning, you probably still do this evening.

"Looking in the mirror, I liked what I saw. I worked out, and took care of myself."

Same deal, " I work out, and take care of myself."

You're not reminiscing about something that happened many years ago.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

Very hot!

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