All Comments on 'Lisa's Submission Ch. 03'

I really liked this story. The characters were very real to me. I liked that they were experimenting and didn't know how they would react but were thoughtful and open about their experiences as they progressed through their encounter.

I hope you manage to have real experiences like this one in your life.

I very much enjoy your style of writing. And although in some aspects we are at opposite sides of the spectrum as far as turn on's /or off's, I still enjoy you as the storyteller.

Please let me know when you post a new story. :)