All Comments on 'Lissa's Lesbian Adventure'

Hi PowerGirl96. Great story, I loved the suspense that you built into your writing over the two pages. It certainly provided good erotica. I look forward to viewing more of your work

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You certainly sound like you are speaking from experience. I love the way your story builds up to a climax (actually multiple climaxes)

Sounded too real to be totally a flight of fancy and if there was no basis in reality you'd better go live out those fantasies pretty soon. From the passionin your writing it sounds like you need to lol. This story absolutely begs for a part 2.

I am not usually a fan of lesbian lit, but this story was fantastic. I would attribute that to very realistic characters (I'm suspecting there's more truth than fiction to this story) and a wonderful pace to the story. So many stories on here are just rushed, as if the sexual acts are the only parts worth reading. That, in my humble opinion, cannot be farther from the truth. What makes a story enjoyable to me is a believable cast of characters and a realistic setting; a story with characters that you care to invest your time in and learn about.

You are well on your way to a plethora of hot, erotic stories if you keep writing in this manner. Keep up the FANTASTIC work! You've got a fan in me!

awesomely hot, love it!

Juicy, lovely and beautiful. I loved it!!!!

Sure made me gush early morning before work xxx