All Comments on 'Little Annie Ch. 02'

by InnocentPrincess18

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mel_pomenemel_pomeneover 10 years ago
Yoy said - Hope you enjoyed. Stay tuned for chapter 3.

I did enjoy your story - very much and I am most definitely keeping my eyes open for Ch. 03.

Very well done, Innocent Princess 18, and welcome to Literotica. Five stars.

InnocentPrincess18InnocentPrincess18over 10 years agoAuthor
From The Author

Chapter 3 was just submitted! Hopefully you won't have to wait too long.

MasterfuljimMasterfuljimover 10 years ago
Princess

Please keep writing

You have a short sharp abrupt style, but it is very readable.

My advice would be to slow down a bit and be a little more descriptive, but don't stop writing ...that is only mr opinion

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