by InnocentPrincess18
I did enjoy your story - very much and I am most definitely keeping my eyes open for Ch. 03.
Very well done, Innocent Princess 18, and welcome to Literotica. Five stars.
Chapter 3 was just submitted! Hopefully you won't have to wait too long.
Please keep writing
You have a short sharp abrupt style, but it is very readable.
My advice would be to slow down a bit and be a little more descriptive, but don't stop writing ...that is only mr opinion