All Comments on 'Little Black Ball Ch. 02'

Great story Maybe the two could meet while away. and He could put the Fear in His wifes Ex Lover. Great Story

It seems that the chapter 01 of "Little black ball" is incomplete as Elaine Davidson has a lot to pay for what she did to her husband. Gary Davidson was bound, gagged, drugged, humiliated and over the top, was about be stripped off his self earned wealth by both his wife and her lesbian lover. More than half of an entire page has been dedicated to his humiliation, snide remarks from Elaines lesbian lover and his own remorse. Yet when it came to Gary's payback on Eliane, there weren't that many details on Eliane's own physical, emotinal pain, what she was going through as a result of what she did to Gary and what Gary did to her in return. There was no remorse at all on her part except for futile attempts to rationalize and justify her wrongful actions on her huband. Therefore a possible follow-up is what I suggest where Eliane endures more pain, remorse and agony before finally succumbing to her lesbian lover's fate, "A whore for Gary's sperm".

Twisted, true... But I liked it!!!

please continue i like it

keep up the good work

1 and 2 are good. now these are great "fantasy" revenge stories.

A good story once again Seurat, and justice was really and truly done I like your ideas, as with the first story a little off the wall but still good. thanks again for writing.

stranger.

She played the game and got released and went looking for Susan. When she/he found her it wasn't pretty. It took Susan 3 days to die. By then she/he had her Power of Attorney and all her passwords. Disposing of the body pieces, Ms. Henson lived a wonderful life. She married a rich man who loved her and lived happily ever after. The end to a pile of garbage.

This chapter is much better than #1 - nobody innocent got hurt, whereas in #1, all of bitches' future partners would be hurt as per ex-husband's words to her.